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Friday, July 8, 2011

Narrative Writing (Picture 1)

37 comments:

  1. Amirul Fikri Cason 5 PPUJuly 8, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    two man for handsome

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  2. i) ramli cycling with he father
    ii) tow boy cycling around mountain

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  3. 1.the bicycle so beautiful.
    2. two man look good

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  4. 1.the picture is not creative
    2.the bicyle is not good
    3.the boys is not handsome

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  5. 1. two men cycled.
    2. two men wear helmet.
    3. the bicycle is beautiful.

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  6. 1.the pictre is not xexy 2.the bicyle is not xexy 3.the boys is not xexy

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  7. two boys drive redbrick to Mountbatten

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  8. faridzul hisyam 5PPUJuly 8, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    1)At picture,have two men
    2)Have two bicycle at the picture
    3)two men rider the bicycle

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  9. @irfan 5ppu

    Ramli is cycling with his father.
    Two boys are cycling around the mountain.

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  10. @ain 5ppu

    1. the bicycle so beautiful.
    2. two man look good

    Corrections:
    1. The bicycles are so beautiful.
    2. The two men are handsome.

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  11. the men cycling at evening.
    the men exercise with cycling a bicycle.
    the men cycling with beautiful bicycle.

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  12. 1:there are two mens cycling a bicycle near the hills
    2:the mens are exercises by cycling every evening.
    3:the mens take care of their health by cycling.

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  13. @Faisal_AR_5ppu

    the men cycling at evening.
    the men exercise with cycling a bicycle.
    the men cycling with beautiful bicycle.

    Corrections:

    1.The men are cycling in the evening.
    2.The men exercise by cycling their bicycles.
    3. The men cycle their beautiful bicycles.

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  14. @esa CR7

    .the picture is not creative
    2.the bicyle is not good
    3.the boys is not handsome

    Corrections:

    2. The bicycle are not in good quality.
    3. The boys are not handsome.

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  15. villa = yo bro....where are you going........
    messi = i want to go to club...

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  16. @Izzuddin 5 PPU

    two men cycled.
    2. two men wear helmet.
    3. the bicycle is beautiful.

    Corrections:

    1. Two men are cycling.
    2. The bicycles are beautiful.

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  17. @faizzullah 5ppu

    1.the pictre is not xexy 2.the bicyle is not xexy 3.the boys is not xexy

    Note:
    I couldn't understand your sentences.
    Sorry

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  18. Amirul Fikri Cason 5 PPUJuly 8, 2011 at 10:32 AM

    two boys is not handsome.
    two bicycle is not beautiful.

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  19. The two boy bicycle at everning.The boy very handsome.

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  20. Ali and Ahmad is a friend.every evening,there are exercise.there are exercise by bicycle.

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  21. uututututhfuhfughuhhuf

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  22. Amirul Fikri Cason 5ppuJuly 8, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    yeee hari nie blik kampung....

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  23. @syarif 5ppu

    two boys drive redbrick to Mountbatten

    Note:

    My dear shariff, what is your attention?

    The two men are using mountain bike.

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  24. One day Ali and Along go to mountain.They look very tied.

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  25. Faisal and Fazwan are cycling. The bicycles are not beautiful.

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  26. abu and ahmad was bought a new bicyles yesterday.After that,they were cycling around the hill near abu's house.

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  27. @faridzul hisyam 5PPU

    )At picture,have two men
    2)Have two bicycle at the picture
    3)two men rider the bicycl

    Corrections:
    )In the picture,there are two men.
    2)There are two bicycles in the picture.
    3)The two men are riding bicycles.

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  28. last week,i and with my friend ali rides the bicycle go to garden.my bicycle is very beautiful.i and my friend is very happy to ride the bicycle

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  29. sir handsome today

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  30. @hafiz 5ppu

    1:there are two mens cycling a bicycle near the hills
    2:the mens are exercises by cycling every evening.
    3:the mens take care of their health by cycling.

    Notes and Corrections:
    1. men is already is plural form, man=men, no s is needed.
    = Thre are two men cycling bicycle near the hills.
    = The men are exercises by cycling every evening.
    = The men take care of their health by cycling.

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  31. ufghuihdhdhdhhfjhdjfhjdhjdhfjhdfjhdjhdjhfjdh

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  32. @hafiz 5ppu

    abu and ahmad was bought a new bicyles yesterday.After that,they were cycling around the hill near abu's house.

    Correction:
    Abu and Ahmad bought new bicycles yesterday. After that,they went cycling around the hill near Abu's house.

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  33. sir so handsome today

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  34. two friends are cycling sabeel fresh air...to sir mokhzani..sir was handsome and smart......

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  35. the two friends are cycling

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